Term 1 2014 Written Language

WALT write a timed recount about a time when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
·      when and where you did something special
·      who was with you
·      what you did (think about the order you did things)
·      how you felt and why you felt this way.

By Joshua Stuthridge


I went swimming with Dad and Mum and it was fun and I went on the hydro-slide. Suddenly I saw the end. And I went to the other side of the hydro-slide.

Next steps
Write more details to tell where you went swimming and how you felt about it.

What other things did you do at the pool with your parents?

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